Do authors write stories, or do they write themselves?

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Do authors write stories, or do they write themselves?

Postby Meredith Malkins » Sun Jan 22, 2017 6:22 am

I've just finished a book called "My Heart & Other Black Holes", by Jasmine Warga. It was a great story (if you ignored the bad editing: poor sentence structure, sunlight glinting off shiny objects when it was well after 5pm in winter, that sort of thing), right up until 9 days left. I was left bitterly disappointed with the ending, and with the book in general. Why? Because of bad writing.

This author clearly didn't understand (and certainly wasn't told by editor or early readers) that you don't write the story, the story writes itself through you. She by-passed all the work she'd done before for the ending she wanted, making at least one character completely defunct, and accidentally making her narrator unreliable. It could have ended happily ever after, just in a different, more realistic, and much less condescending way.

I want to start a discussion about books that were forced by an author to go the way they wanted it, with not-so-great results. Or maybe you disagree, and think that the author writes the story. Or perhaps you're somewhere in-between.

Share with the group. What do you think?

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Re: Do authors write stories, or do they write themselves?

Postby Prof. Tarma Amelia Black » Tue May 09, 2017 5:43 am

Watching the posts from the HOLWriMo, and having read what many authors write about their writing style and where the stories come from -- I'm thinking that the stories and how they are written are as varied as there are stories.

Why is this?

Some authors refuse to write out the plots of the stories ahead of time. They do not know where it is going and they don't want to know where it is going. One very well-known author says if she writes out the story line, and plot, then she doesn't write it ... because she knows where it goes.

Other authors have written that they have in their head, they know all of the story, from the get-go, whether they write it down or not. They know who does what and when and how ... and this goes for a story (and story line) which encompasses many books of a series! And it stays virtually the same as the original concept.

Then others have written they know some parts of the plots and think they know EXACTLY where everything is going and then someone shows up in the middle of the story, unexpectedly, and sort of muscles their way into the story. (One person who did this, showed up in a story, actually ended up the main character of anothe whole book -- much to that author's amusement, bemusement and delight.)

What little I've written usually starts out with an idea, a situation, and then develops. I seldom know precisely how it will end although I might have a general idea of this or that. And then, sometimes (as you say) the story writes itself, willy nilly, and no matter what I do to try to change it, it goes back to what it IS. Period.
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