I actually loved these poems, especially the second one. It was playful both in tone and style; major kudos to you as that is something I definitely struggle with myself. As mentioned, you show a range in topics and a flexibility that I truly envy. My only critique would be that there wasn't more for me to read!
I loved the last stanza in your last poem; very descriptive and it made me, as the reader actually feel the cold. You paint a very clear picture with your words, as well as evoke feeling, which is not something that everyone can do. You have a real talent; for Merlin's sake don't ever quit writing!!
Ravenclaw Prefect/Student Teacher/ar1107
“Do what I do. Hold tight and pretend it’s a plan!”